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The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries. Summarize the informationby selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries. Summarize the informationby selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given table compares water consumption between Brazil and the Democratic Republic of Congo
while
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 the bar graph represents the amount of water used by part from 1900 to 2000.
Overall
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, Brazil has the highest population with 176 million .
However
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, the citizen in Congo is just over five million. In general,it can be seen from the line graph that Agriculture has the highest amount
in contrast
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 to domestic use which has the lowest number during the century. There is a large difference in water usage per person which is over 350. In conclusion, all given sectors displayed an
an
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upward trend.

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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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