You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the percentage of people going to cinemas in one European country on different days. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graph below shows the percentage of people going to cinemas in one European country on different days.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The graph below illustrates the
percentage
of people that go to the
cinema
during a week in one European country in 2003, 2005 and 2007. At first glance, it can clearly be seen that most people go to the
cinema
on
Saturday
during the
years
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year
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,
while
minor goes to the
cinema
on
Monday
and
Wednesday
. First of all, in 2003, a lot of people spend their time in the
cinema
on
Saturday
reaching 40%. After that, the
percentage
went down on Friday and Sunday landing
on
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at
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the same
percentage
which is 30%. On Thursday in the same year, almost 25% go to the
cinema
which was significantly higher than the ones on Tuesday. On
Monday
and
Wednesday
, the
percentage
has
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reached 10% and 16%, respectively. In 2005,
Saturday
reached the top of the
most
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busiest day in the
cinema
reaching 45%.
Then
, on Sunday the
percentage
dropt
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dropped
drops
drop
to slightly under 35%. It kept going down until it remained at 30 % for
the
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three years. on Thursday,
Wednesday
and
Monday
, the
percentage
were
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slightly similar. That was lower than the
percentage
on Tuesday. In 2007, most of the
percentage
is divided between Sunday and
Saturday
reaching 43% and 32%.
In addition
, the ratio on Thursday and Tuesday
are
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exactly the same as it stayed at 19%. On
Wednesday
the ratio was 8% which was lower than the one on
Monday
by 5%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, cinema, saturday, monday, wednesday with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 8 times.
Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.

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