Counties with long working days are more successful economically, but there are some negative social consequences. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nations having more working stressful job is a
hours
are leading the world
economically as per the statistics. I contend that working continuously with no time to relax and refresh would have repercussions on the life of the individual despite contributing to the country
's GDP. In the modern era where mental health crisis and lifestyle diseases
are the hot discussion, stressful job hours
is an issue to be addressed.
In this
fast-paced world
where citizens are confronted with depression and mental well-being, long working hours
, andAdd an article
the
matters
to be discussed. Change the noun form
matter
For example
, the United States of America is the global leader economically,
and is Remove the comma
apply
also
the leading country
battling mental health illness. This
proves a direct relationship between the people
residing in well-developed states and issues related to mental health. Furthermore
, the Republic of China, the biggest rival of America fighting for the top spot in the world
is a country
accused of offering a bare minimum vacation period for the citizens. In order for the country
to be in the top position, the government demands from the people
is a case of human rights violation. People
are often exhausted and burned out, not able to spend quality time with family and sleep deprived. Consequently
, people
are exposed to various lifestyle illnesses such
as premature diabetes, and heart disease. For instance
, countries doing well financially have led to better advancement in terms of healthcare and various diseases
have been kept at bay. Ironically, stress undertaken by the folks of the nation for the betterment of the country
has led to the highest number of cases of autoimmune diseases
and lifestyle diseases
in 1st world
countries.
I would like to summarize by saying that long working hours
is a topic to addressed and government should propose policies in order to bring order in the life of people
in a country
. Struggles and stress faced by people
need to be met accordingly
and the quality of life of people
should be maintained. Some countries have taken initiative in reducing the number of working hours
identifying the problems faced by the people
. Examples worth mentioning are Portugal, Sweden, and Switzerland.Submitted by namzadtp.tp on
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