Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

These pictures
shows
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the composition of a solar panel and how it is used for heating
water
and
air
.
Overall
, from the
picture
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it can be seen that the
process
is quite easy and except
of
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for
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the solar panel the sun is needed.
Therefore
, there is one slight difference between
heating
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the heating
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process
of
air
and
water
. The solar panel consists of a
box
on the top of which a transparent cover is placed, an inlet on the left side of the
box
where the cold
air
or
water
flows into the
box
and the outlet from which the heated material exits. The difference between solar panels for the
air
and
water
is that during the heating
process
of
water
,
the
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an
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additional pipe will be needed which will connect the
enter
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entry
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with the exit. The
process
itself consists of the flow of
water
or
the
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apply
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air
through the inlet into the
box
where elements are heated by sun rays which
falls
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on the transparent top of the
box
and
then
the heated product comes out through the outlet into the facility where it is needed.
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