The diagram below shows the recycling process of aluminium cans. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The scheme illustrates the
aluminum
recycling process. The diagram shows 7 steps Change the spelling
aluminium
which
Correct pronoun usage
apply
used
for recycling. Add a missing verb
are used
Such
as “used cans”, collection, cleaning, sorting, shredding and compressing, heating and melting, rolling, recycling and reusing.
The first step represents used cans. The cans which were in trash
, go to Add an article
the trash
collection
by Add an article
the collection
garbage
truck. The third stage provides Add an article
a garbage
the garbage
following
actions: cleaning, sorting, shredding and compressing. First of all, cans are cleaned Correct article usage
the following
from
dirt, Change preposition
of
after
that sorted and crushed into pieces. Correct word choice
and after
At
the Change preposition
In
end
these pieces compressed. The next step shows heating and melting. Add a comma
,end
A
Correct the article-noun agreement
Little
little
pieces of cons Correct quantifier usage
few
sent
to heating and start to melt, achieving a liquid. After that, they get a roll Add a missing verb
are sent
with
2,5 mm-6mm thick. Change preposition
apply
On
the Change preposition
In
last
stages
it’s recycling and started reusing.Add a comma
,stages
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