Counties with long working days are more successful economically, but there are some negative social consequences. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Working hard can make a
person
financially stable .
However
, some argue that working for a long time can have some negative impact on individuals and I
also
agree that engaging in a job for long hours can definitely create some social problems in
people
. But I
also
believe that it helps them to fulfil their dreams . On the one hand , working overtime can create some
issues
in
a
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individual's physical and social
life
. We can see that
,
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today most
people
are working continuously for a long day , and they don't have the time to discuss problems in
the
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families or spend time with their loved ones because of it and
as a result
, they are having
issues
with their families and friends , eventually , leading to big
issues
like divorce and stress
issues
.
For example
, in metropolitan countries like The USA , stress
issues
and divorce rates are much higher compared to other countries and the findings revealed that
this
is mostly
due to
work pressure between
people
.
On the other hand
, having a successful economy can
also
make a
person
happier in
life
and they can
also
use the money
to
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leisure activities . It is obvious that everyone
have
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an ambition in their
life
,
therefore
, working hard for that can help
a individuals
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to achieve that
dream
and
as a result
, they can
be enjoy
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their
life
.
For instance
, if a
person
's
dream
is to live in a mansion that the individuals
dream
of
then
he had to work day and night to achy that goal so that , they can be successful in their
life
.
To conclude
,
it is clear that
working overtime can have a serious effect on
people
's social
life
. But , I
also
assume that working hard
also
can a
person
to
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achieve his
dream
and be successful.
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