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with an increasing population communicating via the internet and text messaging, face to face communication will become a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree?

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There are several keys towards business success.
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, some people think that
product
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worth
to penetrate
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 a
product
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market
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 for a successful outcome. I partially agree with
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 view as there are other components as well that needs to
be consider
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. Marketing and
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are
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an
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essential
department
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departments
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 of a
company
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. If an organization have a lacking in their branding strategies,
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reputation and revenue loss.
This
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 department prepares tactics to enhance adaptability by
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user
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 and compete with other substitutes available in
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market
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.
For instance
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, Apple a renowned
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started their manufacturing plant
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 a small scale and
due to
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 their focus on marketing strategies, they are now leading in mobile phones.
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, there are some other keys as well towards a benefit of a
company
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.
Price
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 and
quality
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 play a vital role towards
company
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 profit.
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 inflation rate, clients in
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market
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 have become
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price conscious
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 and they prefer
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a product
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product
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products
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 with reasonable
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price
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prices
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 and better
quality
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. So, creating a
quality
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product
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with
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reasonable
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price
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 is a challenge for a
company
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 as compromise can lead to
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the direct
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 impact on
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company
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 reputation and financial loss.
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, Nokia Brand has captured 80%
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 share
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 its robust technology and reasonable
price
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 within a year.
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, these factors should be considered
while
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 launching a
product
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 in
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market
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.
To conclude
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,
Product
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 marketing,
price
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 and
quality
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 have
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importance
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 for
the
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business development
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high
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the high
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 competition in
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market
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the market
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. By taking certain
measure
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measures
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 and strategies, an organization can establish
a
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 desired profit.

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