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some people think that parents should teach their children to be a good member of society whereas other believe that school should teach them. discuss both sides and give your opinion

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It is considered by many that it is parents' duty to teach their kids to be good members of the community
while
 others argue that
children
 should learn it at school. The reasons that support both views will be presented in the essay. On the one hand, it is true that parents play an important role in
children
's lives.
To begin
 with, the family are the first group that they see and live
.
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 with that results in action and thinking coming from things that their father and mother show them.
For example
, if a parent said rude words, the kid will act like them.
However
, some people argue that friends will become the main factor
instead
 of the parent School refer to the place where students who come from
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different family stay together. Conflict happens from different beliefs.
That is
 the reason why schools should teach
children
 about ways to stay with each other. In my point of view, both are significant for teaching
children
.
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