The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950.

The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950.
The three maps illustrate how the West
Park
Secondary
School
had been transformed from the beginning of the construction project in 1950 until 2010.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the
school
had increased in size during the period given and the car
park
was doubled in size
at the end
of the construction period.
However
, the other areas had a slight change in different years. In 1950, the
school
was built opposite the main road and nearby the residential
area
, which had the farmland located back to them.
Moreover
, there was a children’s play
area
that was built behind the
school
. In the next 30 years, the playground remained the same but the
school
was expanded in a westerly direction to build a science block. Aside from the science block, there was a small car
park
which was built on land nearby previously occupied by houses.
In addition
, the farmland was demolished and changed into a sports
field
. In 2010, the
school
building remained unchanged but the car
park
was extended significantly more than double its original size by replacing the
area
of the sports
field
. It can be seen that the sports
field
was moved into the playground
area
, dividing the children's play
area
space in half to share the
area
with the
field
.
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