The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in UK, divided into three categories, from 1995 – 2002.
The bar chart illustrates how
many
Correct quantifier usage
much
time
(in minutes
) that
people in the UK spent on the telephone in three different categories from 1995 to 2002. Correct word choice
apply
Overall
, the national and international and
mobiles share the same rising pattern, Correct word choice
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while
there was a slight fluctuation in the time
UK citizens spent on the local telephone over a period from 1995 to 2002.
At the beginning of the period, in 1995, the British spent 7000 billion minutes
calling by local-fixed line, while
the amount of time
for the national and international lines was haft of that. The mobile phone has little usage this
year, before increasing dramatically all the time
and reaching about 50 billion minutes
in 2002. Local calling was the most common way throughout the period and reached a peak in 1999 at 90 billion minutes
, at which point there was a gradual drop due to
the popularity of the other 2 categories.Submitted by luuvuthanhdat2005 on
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