Your friend has asked you to help him/her to ﬁnd a music teacher for his/her child. Write a letter to your friend that you have found a suitable teacher. In your letter, you should tell: what experience the teacher has why you think he/she is suitable how to get in touch with the teacher. write 150 words

#friend #ﬁnd #music #teacher #child #touch

Hi Maria, I am writing to you on

this

occasion regards to the music teacher for Thomas. my father has recommended one guy that I think would suit you.

firstly

, one really good thing about

Lucas

Mesina the piano tutor is that he has a lot of experience around the world. He has been teaching for the

last

17 years and everything that I've heard about him

are

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good things.

Secondly

, I believe that Thomas would love him because

Lucas

is an amazing surfer, how I know Thomas loves to surf too and always people who share passions connect really well. So

that is

another positive point about

Lucas

Finally

one more thing he just moved next door so if you take

Lucas

to the classes, we will have a perfect excuse to have a coffee together. so I will give you his phone number and you can have a chat and decide. it is 0406489756 he said that prefers a text message. I Look forward to hearing back from you kind regards Gonzalo.

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7 paragraphs

174 words

8.50

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