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Some people say status the main purpose of television should be education.While others say that it should be for entertainment. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

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In the 21st century,
television
 is one of the most popular media for communication and social life. It is
a
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fact that
,
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 some people considered
television
is
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only for
entertainment
 but others
says
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 that it is only for the distribution of education .In
this
 essay, I will explain both views with relevant examples.
To begin
, there are many
television
channels
 widely used for educational
purpose
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.
In addition
, it is more helpful for students to understand the real picture of the nature, history and cultural heritages of the world.
For example
,
TV
 channel programs from Discovery,Animal planet and the national geographical
channels
 stimulate
student's
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 interest
on
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 gathering knowledge.
Furthermore
, it is more convenient for society to accept these educational programmes from
television
 because
TV
considered
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as
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the
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inconvenient electronic media for exchanging ideas.
However
, there
are
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 some contradiction towards these views because nowadays, the management of mass
media's
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always promote
entertainment
 programmes
instead
 of educational programmes the real reason for
this
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,
increasing
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 popularity of
TV
channels
 or for introducing their good and services. In that case, many people supported that
TV
 programs should only
considered
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entertainment
of
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 people.
Although
, some educational experts specified that students need to follow
traditional
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the traditional
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way
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ways
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 of learning like using
library
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the library
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 or practical knowledge from
laboratory
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the laboratory
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.
Therefore
, those educational philosophers and writers strongly opposed
TV
channels
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 involvement
on
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 education. In conclusion, it is true that
television
 can always influence various ways of human life.
Therefore
, it should enhance both educational and
entertainment
 values of humanity among students.
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