In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

In some
countries
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it is a common trend to own a
home
rather than
renting
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one.
This
tendency is explained by several reasons. The main cause is that
people
prefer to own a
home
because they find it troublesome to move from one house to another one.
This
means that it is uncomfortable for households to move often because it requires a lot of time and
strengths
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.
Therefore
, it
worsen
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psychological and physical thinking. Another reason might be that owning a house is more financially stable and secure because you do not need to care about the increasing cost of renting and the chance to be evicted. In
this
case, it puts pressure on
people
and means that they have to look for another house. First of all, owning a
home
is a positive trend as long as
people
do not have to pay off a huge mortgage or loan to a bank and go into
debts
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.
This
helps humans to keep financial wealth.
Secondly
, homeowners allow
to do
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anything they want with their property.
For example
, they are able to have control over the design and decoration of their homes so they can generally manage their property as they wish. All in all, there are more positive aspects and explanatory reasons to own a
home
as
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much more convenient for
people
including me.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership
  • renting
  • importance
  • sense of security
  • stability
  • financial investment
  • asset
  • customize
  • decorate
  • belonging
  • community
  • potential
  • future generations
  • long-term
  • cost advantage
  • control
  • living space
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