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Computers are being used more and more in education and so there will soon be no role for the teacher in education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is argued that IT is playing an ever-increasing role in schools and universities and one day
teachers
 will be obsolete. It disagrees that
technology
 will one day replace educators.
This
 essay will discuss,
firstly
 the limitations of
technology
 in education and
secondly
, the essential role
teachers
 play in maintaining discipline in the classroom, followed by a reasoned conclusion.
Technology
 may be able to help students with some things but it has many limitations. IT can not educate people as effectively as real human beings because computers cannot detect things
such
 as context, emotions and how individual words but how these words work in different situations.
However
, there may come a time in the very distant future when computers are able to carry out these tasks. Computers are
also
 unable to ensure good classroom management, A computer may be able to provide a student with lots of information, but it will not be able to motivate or discipline students could simply switch the device off and do nothing for the rest of the class.
Nevertheless
,
this
 may not be a problem for highly motivated adult students. In conclusion, it is not likely that electronic devices will replace
teachers
 in the future because of current limitations in
technology
 and the requirement for
teachers
 to maintain good behaviour in the classroom.
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