The three pie charts show the production, consumption of coffee and where the profit goes around the world.

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The given pie charts compare the production and consumption of countries all around the world, and the factor considers where the profit of the coffee industry goes. The largest percentage of production and related to America and Europe, and the most significant percentage of profit distribution belong to delivery.

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the data on consumption and production, Japan is in common of two factors with 8% and 18% respectively. The percentage of America and Europe as the important countries for consumption is 39% and 41%.

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, there are not a lot of countries exist that have a role to produce coffee. In South Africa, Indonesia, Vietnam and Japan the percentages were 44%,22%,18%, and 16%, respectively. And the most important profit of distribution

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is delivery with 51%.

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The three pie charts show the production, consumption of coffee and where the profit goes around the world.

Write a complaint letter to the owner of a TV channel, to complain about the steady decline in the quality of their TV programmes over the last decades.

some people say that what individuals do to protect cannot make difference, others say that individuals can protect environment. discuss both views and give your own opinion

Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they are released from prison. What do you think are the causes of this? What possible solutions can you suggest?

Some people think that government should invest in wildlife projects and protect them. Other people think it is better if government invests money in other projects. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?