Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

People
have different views about whether providing personal
information
helps screen applicants’ resumes.
While
certain
information
may be useful in
this
process, I believe
people
should have the right to refuse to provide some personal status. On the one hand, it may be rational to argue that
employers
find certain aspects of the applicants’ personal lives relevant to their professional performance. The most important reason is that companies decide who is the candidate most appropriate for the vacancy based on a combination of factors, which include not only his or her professional competency
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but
also
the
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personality,
such
as whether
this
is a team player or a
trouble maker
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. As a matter of fact, personal
information
such
as leisure activities may provide some clues.
For example
,
people
who enjoy group sports may have a better chance to be a nice team player.
On the other hand
, not all personal
information
is related to work, and I believe
this
type of
information
should be kept
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privacy
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the applicants. Marriage status is one good example of
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personal status that should be confidential to
employers
, simply because it usually does not matter at work. Firms have the freedom to choose anyone they consider suitable, for any reason, but it would be wrong to make decisions only based on whether the applicant is married or single.
Furthermore
, notifying irrelevant
information
to
employers
may
also
lead to discrimination against
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group
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of
people
,
such
as specific religious groups. In conclusion, it is my belief that it is reasonable for
employers
to ask for personal
information
as long as it has
connection
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to working performance, but other
information
should be respected and protected as
privacy
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • job application
  • personal information
  • hobbies and interests
  • marital status
  • relevant
  • useful
  • privacy
  • assessing candidates
  • qualifications
  • experience
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