The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided pie charts illustrate the percentages of the annual expenses
in
a school in the United Kingdom in three years (1981, 1991, 2001).
Change preposition
of
Overall
, in each year, teachers' salaries was
reported as the highest spending, Change the verb form
were
while
the lowest for insurance purposes.
In 1981, teachers' wages accounted for 40% and increased in the next decade and reached to
50%. Change preposition
apply
However
, the percentage allocated for teachers
salaries was reduced back to 45% in 2001. Change noun form
teachers'
teacher's
Similarly
, expenses for books and resources started at 15% in 1981 and inclined to 20% in 1991 before experiencing a significant drop to 9% in 2001. Besides
, the percentage of insurance expenses increased from 2% to 8% between 1981 and 2001.
On the other hand
, the percentage of spending on salaries
of other employees in the school was reduced throughout the period. It began at 28% in 1981 and reduced to 22% and 15% in 1991 and 2001 respectively. Correct article usage
the salaries
However
, the expenditures on furnitures
and other Correct your spelling
furniture
equipments
accounted for 15% Change the wording
equipment
types of equipment
pieces of equipment
in
the beginning of the period and dramatically dropped to 5% in 1991, and Change the preposition
at
then
rocketed to 23% in
the end of the period.Change the preposition
at
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