The graph below shows the qatari import totals( in tons) for several types of vegetables from 1980 to 2020

The graph below shows the qatari import totals( in tons) for several types of vegetables from 1980 to 2020
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The table demonstrates information about
the
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Qatar
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imports the kind of vegetables,
espicially
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especially
spinach,broccoli ,garlic,peas and ginger.The units are measured in tonnes between 1980 and 2020.
Overall
,
it is clear that
imports of spinach
downtrended
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downtrend
dramatically over the period shown.
However
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the amount of other
vegetables
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import
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imported
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increase slowly from 1980 till 2020. Regarding the table,
although
the amount of
import
for spinach was the most in the first years, a sharp decline was the case in
import
for
this
vegetable from 500
tonne
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to 350 in
4-decades
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4 decades
In stark contrast,the amount of
import
for
braccoli
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broccoli
rise slightly from 200 to 300 between 1980 and 2020,
respectivly
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respectively
.
Furthermore
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there was seen a stagnation in
import
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the import
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for
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peas and ginger in 150 and 250 for
2-decades
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2 decades
and
this
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numbers changed to 170 and 260 ,in turn,in the final year.The table for garlic
import
increased slightly by 100 in the shown years and
this
was the highest
indecator
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indicator
in the group.
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