In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without any payment. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

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people have some consideration about paper books and newspapers will not be purchased because of
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and papers are easy to get and can
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free
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.
However
, in my opinion,there are some
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and
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wich
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will be delighted in the paragraph. First of all, I must say that
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e-books
and paper are more fruitful than
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book
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as
it
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can save
one
's valuable time.
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one
can read papers from
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, they do not need to go
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the library
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or any other public places.
Moreover
,
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the e-book
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e-book
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e-books
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can carry millions of articles which are free to read.
On the contrary
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must be carried
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place
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to another which is annoying.
For instance
, whenever I try to find out
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meaning of
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or any important
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article
, I do not have to search in the dictionary, just
one
press is enough.
Hence
, I must reckon that
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is well becoming for
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modern
world.
On the other hand
, though
e-books
have various
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of advantages
but
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it has some drawbacks
also
. It might be affected on
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because of
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lighting system of gadgets.It may vital reason for eye diseases.
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, in
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online
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various kinds of people
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so many things and their opinion might not be
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as a result
one
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decision
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a particular subject.
Finally
,
e-books
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the
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mordern
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modern
invention in nowadays, It is a
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system and easy to use,
nonetheless
, I do not fully agree or disagree about them.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • digital accessibility
  • convenience
  • physical storage space
  • cost-effective
  • environmental footprint
  • sustainable
  • quality and authenticity
  • editorial processes
  • digital divide
  • reliable internet access
  • information dissemination
  • consumer preferences
  • economic impact
  • printing industry
  • subscription services
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