The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given maps compare the advancements that occurred in the infrastructure of a rural area,named the Reymowth.It contrasts its current status from the 1995 version.
Overall
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,it is apparent that multiple amenities are added in the current town.In the southeast corner,there is a golf arena ,tennis court,and a parking lot provided for the hotel.
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the northwest zone has been occupied by housing colonies,and in the southwest part shops are replaced with restaurants and the fish market with accommodations.
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, in the previous model of the year 1995,there was farmland in the northeast of the village.
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is now transformed into a golf arena.
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,to the south of the farming grounds,a forest park was located, and over the years,the trees had been cut down to establish a tennis court.
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a cafe and a hotel are still working,in southern and northern premises to the main road,respectively.
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,another facility of the car parking area is introduced beside the hotel. Turning to the western side of the village,which is mainly devoted to residential areas, and in the current version,more houses are built in the western lane.Road provides access to all housing proximities.That runs from the northwest in an oblique direction to join the southwest end of the village,where it connects the east of the town to the west.
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zone,shops are converted into restaurants and fish markets into apartments.Ultimately, the fishing port is extracted out of the sea.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "provided" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • transformation
  • key features
  • contrasting
  • developments
  • alterations
  • enhancements
  • infrastructure
  • recreational facilities
  • emerging
  • adaptation
  • population growth
  • connectivity
  • accessibility
  • preserve
  • aesthetics
  • analytically
  • livability
  • notable facilities
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