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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected types of relationships people make? Is this a positive or negative development?

#people #technology #relationships #development
In
modern
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 era,one of
most
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 controversial issues around the
worls
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world
 is
technology
.And many items
that
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related to that.
Technology
 is
double-edged
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 sword.it has
a
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numerous negative or positive points
on
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peoples
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 life.In my view,advancement in
technology
 has
their
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 own advantages and disadvantages.In
this
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 with some examples. On the one hand,there are many factors that
technology
 has increased our communication with other
people
 around the world more than
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 decades.
people
,first of all,can
interac
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interact
 with
wide
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 variety of
people
 in other countries,
anytimes
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at times
 they want or anywhere they are.and
people
 most of the times are enable and online and they can answer to each other immediately.
Technology
 has no border.And it
help
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 us
short
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 our distances.
In addition
,in modern times,
people
 not only can have free calls,
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 calls to their friends and their relatives but
also
they
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can share their feelings and their opinions with other
people
in
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 social media and can make new and countless like-minded friends.
On the other hand
,in many aspects
technology
 could harm our life.Some
people
 have no tendency to communicate
to
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with
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people
 who are in their surroundings.
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Because
their
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prefer
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 spend their time
in
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 social media or surfing
in
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the internet
instead
 of speaking with their families and their parents.Another
further
 negative
points
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 is that
,
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almost half of the
people
 around the world have no access to social media or even
internet
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the internet
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 and they can communicate with
other person
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another person
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 easily.
Besides
,some old peoples have no ability to use any
kinds
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 of
technology
.
Forexample
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For example
 our grandparents or some elderly
people
arround
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around
 us need our care or attention and they want to see their relatives face-to-face not just behind the phone.
To sum up
,it is well-established fact that
technology
improve
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 our ability to contact
with
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all the
people
 around the world,but in some
way
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 it could harm
people
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people's
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 relationship and it was the
causes
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cause
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 of
people
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 depression or their lonely.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Interact
  • Social media platforms
  • Networking
  • Instant messaging
  • Face-to-face interaction
  • Misunderstandings
  • Emotional context
  • Superficial connections
  • Deceptive identities
  • Privacy concerns
  • Social skills
  • Video calls
  • Online presence
  • Digital communication
  • Cyber relationships
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