The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane.
The picture below describes the process in which
sugar
is manufactured from Use synonyms
sugar
cane.
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Overall
, the production of Linking Words
sugar
from Use synonyms
sugar
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canes
needs a total of seven steps. It Fix the agreement mistake
cane
begin
with farming Change the verb form
begins
sugar
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canes
and finishes with Fix the agreement mistake
cane
sugar
.
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At
the first Change preposition
In
step
, Use synonyms
sugar
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canes
are planted and cared Fix the agreement mistake
cane
from
12 to 18 months, and the stalks are Change preposition
for from
then
harvested. The harvesting process can be done in two ways: using machines or using human powers. Following that, a Linking Words
crushers
which Correct the article-noun agreement
crusher
has
huge rollers Change the verb form
have
presses
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press
sugar
cane Use synonyms
juice
out of the stalks, and after that, Use synonyms
this
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juice
is refined by a limestone filter in the purifying Use synonyms
juice
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step
.
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The next
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step
is Use synonyms
evaporator
, which Add an article
the evaporator
an evaporator
have
another name Change the verb form
has
is
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apply
juice
becomes syrup, in Use synonyms
this
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step
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juice
is boiled under fire to form Use synonyms
syrup
. The sixth Add an article
a syrup
step
of Use synonyms
this
process is Linking Words
centrifuge
, the syrup Add an article
a centrifuge
are
spun in the centrifuge to remove liquid and produce Change the verb form
is
sugar
crystals. Use synonyms
Finally
, the Linking Words
sugar
is dried and cooled, Use synonyms
then
packed and sold in many places.Linking Words
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