The diagram below shows the production of olive oil. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates how olive
oil
is produced from olives.
Overall
, it is a linear process consisting of 7 main stages: picking, rinsing, smashing, bagging, pressing, separating and keeping for sale.
The first step is
to assemble olives, by using manual labor
, from the trees to rinse these in Change the spelling
labour
a special equipment
with cold water. Once, it has been rinsed, it is Remove the article
special equipment
a piece of special equipment
then
belted in a grinder to remove bones. Following
this
, it is smashed to produce both olive paste and olive stones. If we need to receive olive oil
, we will use the olive paste to pack it in a bag with holes.
In the next step, it is pressed and separated in
the special machines. In the Change preposition
into
last
stage, after separating there can be obtained pure oil
and impurity of water, which doesn’t participate in the process. And then
, the pure oil
can be stored to sell to future customers.Submitted by alieksdandr on
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