The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided maps illustrate an
island
as it was previously and after modifications for the purpose of tourism.
Overall
, the major changes includes
a new reception and a restaurant, new footpaths and vehicle tracks which Change the verb form
include
facilitates
people and vehicle movements and accommodation areas.
The biggest Correct subject-verb agreement
facilitate
changes
to Fix the agreement mistake
change
this
island
is
introducing new accommodation buildings Change the verb form
are
as
two groups, which can accommodate a larger number of tourists. These accommodations are placed Change preposition
for
in
the right and the centre of the Change preposition
on
island
. In addition
to that, a brand new restaurant has opened in
the top side of the Change preposition
on
island
, to facilitate all the visitors with foods
and beverages. Fix the agreement mistake
food
Furthermore
, reception
was built to welcome tourists to the Add an article
the reception
a reception
island
.
Moreover
, a large pier has built
to support all the yachts and boats Add a missing verb
been built
in
the bottom side of the Change preposition
on
island
. Also
, a swimming area was introduced in
the left side of the Change preposition
on
island
for the
Correct article usage
apply
entertaining
purposes. Replace the word
entertainment
Finally
, no changes have been made to the trees in
the Change preposition
on
island
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words island with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
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