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Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on society?

Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on society?
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The problem of whether or not more part of
students
 should choose
science
 subjects in universities has sparked a heated debate.
While
 some argue that it is a normal phenomenon and
science
 doesn’t have great importance, I claim that
this
 problem can lead to distractive consequences. There are two main reasons why
science
 subjects play a substantial role in our lives. One of them is the technological world based on scientists. We are living in the world of technology now and
this
 part is irreplaceable. Another cogent reason is lack of specialists can stop development in IT spheres and engineering.
For instance
,
according to
 “Worldwide Study Analytics”,only just one in twenty
students
 give preference to
science
 subjects. I personally believe that the deficit of undergraduates is relatively negative for several reasons with one being the plummet of specialized scholars and the stopping of technical progress.
In addition
, some universities don’t attract
students
 enough for education in
science
 faculty and
due to
this
, there are not enough participants.
To conclude
, not sufficiently number of
students
 would lead to a negative impact on modernization and the development of our lives.
However
, recognizing the importance of
this
 problem, it’s advisable to encourage the government and teachers to be attentive and responsible for
this
 issue because our future is in the hands of the younger generation.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • deter
  • promotion
  • opportunities
  • role models
  • lucrative
  • employment
  • gender stereotypes
  • societal norms
  • access to information
  • technological stagnation
  • shortage
  • skilled professionals
  • innovation
  • healthcare sector
  • workforce
  • global competitiveness
  • advancements
  • economic growth
  • public health services
  • environmental sciences
  • combat climate change
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