The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.

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The process provided illustrates the different steps happening when

plastic

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bottles

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are recycled.

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, a total of 9 steps are involved in the whole process starting with collecting discarded

plastic

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bottles

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and ending with new commodities made from recycled materials. In detail, after being used,

plastic

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bottles

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are often disposed of in trash bins from which they will be gathered by specialized trucks. When they are successfully transported to the recycling points, they will first be sorted into different groups

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specific criteria. After that, in order to reduce their sizes for the ease of moving, the sorted

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will be compressed into blocks which will later go through a crusher with sharp rollers, and be cut into smaller pieces.

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the pieces will be washed before being transported to a machine to

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grind into

plastic

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pellets. Those pellets will be transformed into raw materials after being heated. From those raw materials, end products

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as T-shirts,

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boxes,

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, pencils, or bags will be made and delivered to customers.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words plastic, bottles with synonyms.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

172 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

recycling
mitigate
environmental impact
landfills
conservation
sorted
residual waste
adhesives
shredded
pellets
manufacturing
ecological
economical
sustainable
automation
raw material
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The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.

Leisure is a growing industry. Nowadays, more of modern technology is used in entertainment, which may lead people to be less creative. Do you agree or disagree? state your view with examples.

The top priority of businesses is making money, and they do not need to have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

1.Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films. Why could this be? Should governments give more financial support to local film industries.

Some people believe that zoos where animals are kept in a man-made environment should no longer exist in the 21st century. To what extent you agree or disagree?