The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainme

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The following table highlights data, about an average individual from five different European countries and their monthly earning expenditures on things like foodstuff, housing, clothing and entertainment.
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, it is visible that Food and drink and housing are the main priorities for citizens, figures for these items indicate over 20% almost in every country but Spain,
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clothing and entertainment were far less important to them, interestingly the highest number reached 19% in Germany which stands for entertainments.
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France, the highest number for housing drew up 31% and the least for clothing with only 7%
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Germany for the same expenses made up 33% and 15% respectively. The UK had spent the most on the housing 37% but clothing
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entertainment were not equal to food and drink 22% and 27% in turn Figures for Turkey and Spain did not have a considerable difference, with only 4-5% but
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both countries outlay most of their income on Food and drink 36 and 31%
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Turkey entertains less and Spain buys less clothing
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