You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter • explain your situation • describe your problems • tell him/her when you think you can start. You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write your own address.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to explain about starting my new job. I cannot begin next

week

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because I am dealing with some serious problems. I am trying to solve two main issues. First of all, as a said before, I am living

another

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in another

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city and I could not find

plane

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a plane

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ticket for the next

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. I wanted to use

bus

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the bus

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however

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unfortunately, because of the winter season, many bus transportation agencies are closed.

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, I cannot arrive

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at the

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company

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apply

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the next

week

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Moreover

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, I am in a very bad condition

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this

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reason. Because, for a long time, I have

waited

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forwaited

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my new position and I felt very excited. I am hoping that I can start

further

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week

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25 June. As I just bought my plane ticket, I will arrive there. If you would accept my situation, I would be very

appreciate

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appreciative

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. Please understand my circumstance. Thank you for taking the time to read

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letter and I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Orhan Canakci

orhanveli2006Mon Feb 27 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

173 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

unforeseen circumstances
apologies
commencement date
postpone
urgent matters
documentation
commitment
flexibility
adjustments
reassurance
eager to contribute
rectify the situation
feasible start date
collaboration
understanding
mitigate

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