the chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee nd tea buying and drinking habits

the chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee nd tea buying and drinking habits
The chart illustrates the evaluation of the survey about how often people consume and purchase
coffee
and tea in five different cities in Australia.
Overall
,
according to
the survey, the majority population in Australia prefer to drink
coffee
or tea at a cafe ,particularly people who live in Melbourne.
Moreover
, the city that experienced the greatest and the least proportion in the
overall
evaluation is Hobert and Adelaide respectively. In the
last
four weeks, going to a shop
for
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grab a beverage
seem
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to be the most popular in Australia ,especially in Melbourne
approximately
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68% and in Hobart
nearly
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65%. Meanwhile, Buying instant
coffee
is ranked as the second most popular, Hobart city accounted for the highest with almost 55% followed by Brisbane and Adelaide which were approximately 52% and 50% respectively.
On the other hand
, the least favourite habit in every city is buying fresh
coffee
, Sydney experienced the largest portion which was around 44%, nearly 42% in Melbourne and hit the floor less than 35% in Brisbane.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey
  • percentage
  • frequency
  • preference
  • health benefits
  • caffeine content
  • cultural significance
  • consumption
  • trends
  • venues
  • social aspects
  • beverage
  • shift
  • influence
  • comparison
  • analysis
  • discussion
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