Some university students move away and live on their own while they are attending school, but others live at home with their family while they are students. Which do you think is a better choice? Give reasons to explain your answer.

the number of

students

prefer when they began as pupils in university live their home and live separate from family.

in contrast

, there are some

students

that like to stay with their

family

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when they are

students

.

although

there are some merits to living alone during the study, I strongly agree that its negative aspects are noticeable. on the one hand, many commentators justifiably argue that there are some advantages when

students

choose to live far away from their

family

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. from

this

point of view they believe, the

students

are able to focus better on their subjects, because they don't have any occupation or conflict with their family.

for example

, they don't have discussions with their brother or sister.

moreover

, they have more silent time for thinking or solving their assignment.

however

, I don't find

this

argument valid because the

students

find it easy to study in the library

instead

of going to their own homes.

on the other hand

, there are those who subscribe to the view that if the

students

stay with

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familly

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family

, they can get several suitable situations. it is

also

maintained that

,

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the mother and father help to live better at home by providing comfortable equipment at home.

such

as the mother cooking a meal or the father supporting their children.

in addition

, their parent protects their children from most threats

such

as Theft. in conclusion, I have a positive attitude towards to live

students

with family ,especially during School Days as they can live safer with mom and dad than live alone.