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Air travel causes environmental pollution, so many people believe that there should be an increase in the price of air tickets in order to reduce air traffic. Do you agree or disagree?

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In the modern world people from rich
countries
 use aeroplanes to visit different
countries
. For
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reason they are always used technically like helicopters and private jets and the
price
 of
this
 type of travelling is very expensive. In
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essay I will analyse the
price
 of air communication and find the answer to
this
 question. Around the
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world the high cost of aeroplanes tickets is
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not a huge problem because society has low-cost aeroplanes and they are very popular in Europe.
For example
, you understand, that you want to fly away from Austria to Italy and check out a
lot
 of nice cities like Rome, Venice, Napoli etc. Thanks for the low
price
 for the ticket we have a chance to do it.
Finally
, I believe that the plane, which has a chip ticket for them is very important
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 since propels can visit new
countries
 and not spend a huge sum to trip.
However
, flying around the world of money cost a
lot
, because planes burn a
lot
 of fuel and
this
 is a reason why seats cost a
lot
. For ,example the flight route from Russia to China costs approximately three thousand dollars for one way. It means
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 that part of nationality does not have any opportunities to visit new
countries
.
Finally
, I understand, that the costs are huge case they burn a giant volume of fuel per hour. In the end, to be honest, I agree with
this
 statement, that the
price
 of the ticket does not be increasing, because it will become a barrier to travellers and a
lot
 of
countries
 can not take money from resorts.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • environmental pollution
  • deterrent
  • aviation technologies
  • disproportionately affect
  • global carbon tax
  • alternative solutions
  • tourism-dependent economies
  • cleaner fuels
  • efficient flight paths
  • carbon emissions
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