some people say that advetising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things . others people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it . Discuss both the views and give your opinion?

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the
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opponents
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of the promoting.In my opinion, advertising is
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successful at persuading us to buy things and it has more positive impacts than negative around the globe. To commence with, there are a number of arguments in favour of my belief. The most prominent
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companies
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better. General people can know about
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most
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people nowadays buy
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after seeing the
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advertisement
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advertising.
On the other hand
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marketing is that it may the reason
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boredom.
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it feels annoying.
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states, advertising creates
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affected
our brains so that people set in their mind
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product will buy next time.
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are a lot of demerits
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marketing, the advantage outweigh the disadvantages and marketing has become a
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should be condemned.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • persuade
  • promote
  • attract
  • influence
  • impact
  • consumerism
  • commercialism
  • market
  • product
  • brand
  • endorsement
  • manipulative
  • saturated
  • overwhelmed
  • repetitive
  • distracting
  • irrelevant
  • exaggerated
  • misleading
  • desensitized
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