Today, more and more students are deciding to move to a different country for higher studies. Do you think that the benefits of this outweigh the problems?

Today, more and more

students

are deciding to move to a different

country

for higher studies. Do you think that the benefits of

this

outweigh the problems?

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of

students

are deciding to relocate abroad for

further

education. In my opinion,

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believe

this

approach will be beneficial

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because it gives them the opportunity to acquire more knowledge and experience, that they could not get in their

home

country

.

To begin

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higher education has always structured a successful career path.

As a result

, some

students

tend to

further

their studies abroad in order to get a good

job

after graduation, especially when their

home

country

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schools with good facilities and resources. Recent studies have proven that companies offer

job

positions to people

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experience.

Therefore

, studying abroad in a better school with an outstanding facility will prepare you better for the

job

market in the future,

this

is because they provide

students

with more insight

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any chosen career field.

For example

, Alums of international universities happen to be the choice of

job

providers in their

home

country

, because their acquired experience plays a vital role

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their company.

Furthermore

, studying abroad promotes inter-communication between people from different countries.

This

is because,

students

attend school abroad with

students

admitted from other countries and

as a result

,

this

gives more enlightenment on the cultures of other nations. A recent survey has stated that people tend to have

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better

relationship

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relationships

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with foreigners when they understand how to communicate with them.

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, an international student

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to make

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of friends from different nations after graduation,

this

is because they are all alums of the same institution.

This

will help build a relationship between

students

with similar career goals.

However

, leaving family behind always affected

students

emotionally.

This

is because

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most international

school

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take at least one year to complete.

Therefore

, some

students

find it hard to survive in a new

country

without family guidance. it is believed that some

students

get depressed from loneliness when they try to live and study in another

country

.

As a consequence

,

this

may affect their concentration and purpose of studying overseas.

To conclude

, education is important in every part of our lives. in my opinion, I will advise more scholars to acquire an international degree in other to excel in their

home

country

.