The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainme

The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainme
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The table shows the percentage of 4 categories of spending (
food
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and
drink
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, housing, clothing and entertainment) which are calculated from household earnings in 5 European countries comprised France, Germany, the UK, Turkey and Spain .
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, it can be seen from the information that
Food
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and
drink
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and housing cost are spent more than the other 2 types (clothing and Entertainment). Interestingly, the least household expenditure in all sample countries clothing cost.
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the data, France, Germany and the UK pay their income the most for housing are 31%,33% and 37% respectively, follow by
food
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and
drink
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account for 25%, 22 % and 27%. Meanwhile, clothing is spent the least in former countries 7%,15% and 11% respectively. Apparently,
food
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and
drink
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are spent the most in both Turkey and Spain 36% and 31%, but Turkism spends their income on entertainment the least of all categories is 10% which is different from other nations.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words food, drink with synonyms.
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