The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph illustrates the percentage of contributions for two sectors in the United Kingdom between 1992 and 2000.
Overall
, we can see that the GDP for service
Correct article usage
the service
industry
increased steadily during all period
. Fix the agreement mistake
periods
However
, the percentage of the IT industry
shew some
fluctuation Correct quantifier usage
apply
through
Change preposition
over
the
time.
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apply
Contribution
of the IT Correct article usage
The contribution
industry
raised relatively by around 2 percent
from 1992 to 1994. Change the spelling
per cent
Then
in 1996
it remained stable at less than 8%. After that contribution raised sharply by 4 Add a comma
,1996
percent
and was at 12%. By Change the spelling
per cent
the
2000 it reached a peak at approximately 15 Change the article
apply
percent
.
The difference between percentages of the service and IT Change the spelling
per cent
industry
dropped slightly from 1992 to 1996 and were 4%, 6% and 7%, respectively. However
, in 1996 it was a little bit less than 8 percent
, but the second category at the same time was higher by 4%. Change the spelling
per cent
In addition
, in the last
year service
sphere rose to a little more than 8 per cent.Correct article usage
the service
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