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Some parents buy their children whatever they ask for, and allow their children to do whatever they want. Is this a good way to raise children? What consequences could this style of parenting have for children as they get older?

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Some individuals are used to buying their
children
 whatever they ask and permitting them to do whatever they want. In my personal point of view, it is a bad habit. In
this
 essay, I will support my ideas with strong arguments and write about
bad
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 consequences. Today a huge number of
parents
 are used to performing any wishes of their
children
. Definitely, it is unprofitable for
children
. Doing whatever they ask can damage the future character of
children
 and time by
time
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 they will become dependent on someone, mostly on
parents
.
For instance
, one of my friends whose
parents
 did whatever he asked cannot solve his simple problems by himself.
Moreover
, allowing
children
 to do whatever they want can
also
 lead to serious problems. Being selfish and egoistic can be
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 it.
For instance
, in the future when
children
 will go to school it would be hard to control them. They will start hysterics and approve that they are right even if they
not
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.
However
, it is just a little. There are some other disadvantages too. The first and most obvious is that these
children
 will become self-interested adults who do not care a lot about the feelings and needs of others. These
children
 will have problems with working in a team with other colleges.
Next
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 negative effect is that these
children
 will be more impulsive. Because of
parents
 who did whatever they asked without any doubt,
children
 will become less patient and have often anger.
To conclude
, it is important to state that
children
 who are allowed to do anything and have nothing
more
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 likely to be selfish. In the future, it will be hard for them to be part of a team.
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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • indulgent
  • entitlement
  • discipline
  • responsibility
  • nurturing
  • self-reliance
  • adversity
  • autonomy
  • validation
  • dependence
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