The maps below show the changes in a small town from 1995 until now.

The maps below show the changes in a small town from 1995 until now.
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The maps illustrate the development which took place in a small town from 1995 to nowadays.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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the comparison of the two maps reveals a complete transformation from a largely rural to a mainly functional zone. In the year 1995, the obvious change is the extension of the house area
along with
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the road construction till present, and on the main road , the number of houses
also
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increased. The town
also
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experienced a change that the forest park and farmland on the corner of the North-East converted into a hill and tennis court. And there was nothing close to the hotel, but at present, building up the car park nearby the hotel. The transformations happened to both sides of the street where the shop became a restaurant
as well as
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a fish market to make way for apartments at present.
By comparison
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with right now, a fishing port existed in 1995, but today it already disappeared from the sea.
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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "comparison" was used 2 times.
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