The diagrams below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate the structure of a public
park
in 1920 and today. At first glance, it can be seen how some major changes happened during this
period, with almost all the old features now substituted by others. In fact, the only things which remained identical are the two entrances and the rose
garden
on the right of Arnold Avenue’s entrance.
Regarding the changes, the most striking one is the substitution of the fountain in the centre of the park
with a rose
garden
, which has seats on every side, while
in 1920 they were spread along the park
. Furthermore
, on the left side of the park
, entering from Eldon street, the space in which a stage for musicians and a rose
garden
were, is now occupied by an amphitheatre for concerts, with only the aforementioned rose
garden
on the right of Arnold avenue’s entrance remaining.
On the other side of the park
, the glass house on the right of Eldon street’s entrance has been changed with a water feature, while
the rose
garden
and the pond for water plants, once located in front of the water feature, have been respectively replaced by a cafè and a children’s play area. Finally
, an underground car park
has been built during this
period.
In conclusion, it can be stated how Grange park
has undergone a great renovation over the years, and how this
can be noted from the new features of the park
, which have been completely changed.Submitted by formaggio124 on
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