We are becoming increasingly dependent on computer–based technology. How do you think it will change in the future? Is it good for us to rely so much on computers?

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computers

have a significant role in the life of

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some

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believe that we are mostly relying on computer-dependent technology.

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the application of

computers

increases more and more with the passage of time we find another option

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for doing a different type of tasks. To commence with,

computers

have a major role in the technical era because of the work served by the

computers

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as with the use of computer we can not only do our work more quickly but

also

more precisely.

besides

that these days

computers

also

provide a platform to the enormous student in to study at their home.

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now learners can grab different types of courses at home with the

helps

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of e-learning.

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with the use of computer we can do different types of tasks in a single device

such

as calculation, set reminders,gather information and

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use as

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of entertainment by watching movies or listening song. Despite the fact that

computers

have huge benefits but limits on the usage of

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were equally important since at present time everyone wants to complete their job with a single click which leads to generating

people

who do not want to some extra effort to do something.

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due to

laziness towards their work

people

do not want to do

a difficult tasks

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. In conclusion, without

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computers computers

computer computers

computers-computers

have a huge role to make the world more advanced in future but using them for every single task to make it more convenient has detrimental effects on life.