You are due to move into a rented apartment next month but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter: explain your situation describe your problems tell him/her when you think you can move in

Dear Mr John, Letter
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notify you that I will not be able to
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into the apartment on the 1st of May. My Name is Olayonu Oluwatimilehin, I am writing
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letter to inform you that there is a current issue with the electrification system of the house I rented, and my rent is
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start on the 1st of May my expected move-in date.
Furthermore
, the electrification
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a major
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affected the electrification box for the entire duplex. More so,
this
will put me and my family in gross darkness at the parament if we move in on the 1st of May, and
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I have reported
this
to the estate electricity unit which they have promised to get
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fixed in two months' time.
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, they stated they will need a replacement of the electric junction box. In conclusion, I will seek your kind understanding to elongate my move-in date to approximately two months time to the month of June(1st of June).
This
will give me adequate time to get
this
sorted out. Thank you in anticipation of your kind response. Best regards, Olayonu
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