You are due to move into a rented apartment next month but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter: explain your situation describe your problems tell him/her when you think you can move in

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Dear Mr John, Letter

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notify you that I will not be able to

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into the apartment on the 1st of May. My Name is Olayonu Oluwatimilehin, I am writing

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letter to inform you that there is a current issue with the electrification system of the house I rented, and my rent is

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start on the 1st of May my expected move-in date.

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, the electrification

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a major

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affected the electrification box for the entire duplex. More so,

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will put me and my family in gross darkness at the parament if we move in on the 1st of May, and

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to the estate electricity unit which they have promised to get

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fixed in two months' time.

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, they stated they will need a replacement of the electric junction box. In conclusion, I will seek your kind understanding to elongate my move-in date to approximately two months time to the month of June(1st of June).

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will give me adequate time to get

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sorted out. Thank you in anticipation of your kind response. Best regards, Olayonu

olayonuoluwatimilehinTue Feb 28 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 6.0

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8 paragraphs

194 words

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