You are due to move into a rented apartment next month but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter: explain your situation describe your problems tell him/her when you think you can move in
Dear Mr John,
Letter I have reported
to
notify you that I will not be able to Add a missing verb
is to
moving
into the apartment on the 1st of May.
My Name is Olayonu Oluwatimilehin, I am writing Change the verb
move
this
letter to inform you that there is a current issue with the electrification system of the house I rented, and my rent is due to
start on the 1st of May my expected move-in date.
Furthermore
, the electrification issues
Fix the agreement mistake
issue
,
Remove the comma
apply
is
a major Correct subject-verb agreement
are
issues
and Change the noun form
issue
has
affected the electrification box for the entire duplex. More so, Correct subject-verb agreement
have
this
will put me and my family in gross darkness at the parament if we move in on the 1st of May, and as a result
Add a comma
,
this
to the estate electricity unit which they have promised to get it
fixed in two months' time. Correct pronoun usage
apply
Also
, they stated they will need a replacement of the electric junction box.
In conclusion, I will seek your kind understanding to elongate my move-in date to approximately two months time to the month of June(1st of June). This
will give me adequate time to get this
sorted out.
Thank you in anticipation of your kind response.
Best regards,
OlayonuSubmitted by olayonuoluwatimilehin on
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