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In many cities, more supermarkets and shopping malls are being built, while the number of small local shops is declining. Why is this the case? What can small local shops do to attract more people to shop locally?

#cities #supermarkets #malls #shops #case #people #shop
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lot
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 of places in cities,
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shops
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shops
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chance
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countries
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same
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cases
.
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people
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different
things
. They have different
items
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.
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large
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space
, and that can give the customers
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fixity
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building
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 of the important
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 of the biggest
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is important as
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shops
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capacity
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people
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shoppe
shop
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shops
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people
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things
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solve
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problems
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much
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some offers
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people
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with out
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without
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