You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were pleased with the food and services. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. Give details of your visit to the restaurant. Explain the reason for the celebration. Say what was good about the food and services.

Dear sir/madam, I am writing
this
letter to give feedback on the green park
restaurant
services that I enjoyed on 25th January 2023. I am Eva smith,
last
month, I visited the
restaurant
with my friends. That time we planned to celebrate the birthday of my best friend at a well-known
restaurant
in my locality.
Apart from
this
, there is a special corner for parties.
Furthermore
, I and my friends gave him a surprise party on his birthday. Because he is living in Canada for higher study.
Besides
this
, he came to India after a long time. Fortunately, we were celebrating his special day in a
restaurant
in my locality. As the
restaurant
provides a lot of offers at parties like giving discounts on food. All in all, your staff welcomes the guests with warm wishes and smiles. After that, they gave some snacks and drinks as a refreshment. In the end, service was excellent
as well as
hotel's food was healthy and hygienic.
Along with
this
, they served the food items at the proper time. Hope you will continue doing so in the future. Yours sincerely, Eva Smith.
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