In a number of developing countries, the quality of air and water is declining day by day. State the problems due to this? Discuss the possible solutions for dealing with these problems.

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In the modern
world
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more and more
goverments
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find problems with water and air
polution
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pollution
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a lot of people have some problems with their health like difficulties with
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and swallowing.
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and other animals suffer. In my
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I will discuss, the troubles, which are caused by producing carbon
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of ecological ways of
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from their tap.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • pollution
  • emissions
  • industrial waste
  • respiratory diseases
  • cardiovascular issues
  • waterborne diseases
  • ecosystems
  • regulations
  • biodiversity
  • public transportation
  • renewable energy
  • waste management
  • fossil fuels
  • public awareness
  • healthcare costs
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