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Some people believe that it is essential to include Physical Education classes in the curriculum for all school-age children. Others think that children's time is better spent om more academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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The school curriculum is supposed to prepare children for adult life in terms like
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 general
education
, the job market, good citizenship and socially accepted behaviour. Physical
education
 has always been part of it, but today questions rise about the necessity of
such
 classes as part of the educational system. It is a well-studied fact that physical activity improves grades, mental state, self-esteem and even memory. All of those benefits have a big impact on a child's life. ,
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 some experts see physical activity as another form of
education
 and discipline method and believe that a well-active kid will grow to be a successful human being. Physical
education
 allows children who struggle with other
subjects
 to excel and enjoy,y their time spent in the educational system.
On the other hand
, the disadvantages of physical classes might include, worse achievements of some students in major
subjects
,
such
 as math and science. Some educational leaders see the future with a great demand for engineers, and scientists,
therefore
 those experts think we should invest as much as possible in STAM
education
instead
 of
subjects
 like sports and PT.
Nonetheless
, those who contradict the presence of physical
education
 say, that physical activities should not be cancelled, but just moved into the child's spare afternoon time and not at the expense of the morning or noon classes.
To conclude
, I think that Physical
Education
, shall be as important as all other
subjects
 since the benefits are lasting a lifetime and producing better, more disciplined and calm individuals,
this
 overshadows the potential drawbacks.
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