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You recently bought an electric gadget for your home. Your friend wants the same gadget and needs your advice. In this letter you should include: • What the gadget is •What you think about it • Advice about other alternatives your friend could buy

#gadget #home #friend #advice #•what #alternatives
Dear John, Hope you are doing
good
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well
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! I received your letter
last
 week, unfortunately, I was unable to get back to you, as I was away for work. You wanted to enquire about the Microwave I purchased two months ago, right? I really needed a microwave as I am usually on the go and need to heat my food instantly and for that matter,
this
 product is working fine. The features are great and it consumes minimum power. The best part is that I bought
this
 on sale, so it was almost half the original price. I am quite satisfied with
this
 purchase.
However
, there were many other options available as well. I really liked the
two in one
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two-in-one
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 Microwave with Oven. Since you are into baking, I would suggest you
to
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apply
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go for it. They have a special offer at Amazon and you can get
this
 for 75% off. I would suggest you, not
to
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apply
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miss
this
 great deal! Please let me know if you need any
further
 assistance. Yours Faithfully, Kiran
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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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