Modern cultures around the world have become similar when compared to the past. What are the reasons? Is it a positive or negative development?
In
this
evolving era, many customs and cultures
around the globe are changing compared to the previous era. There are several reasons why this
phenomenon is happening and I believe that it has offered some advantages.
Modern cultures
have become similar for the following reasons. First of all, one major reason is because of the internet. In other words
, the spreading of information through the internet has brought people
around the globe may easily to access and see other people
’s customs easily. For example
, people
watch Korean dramas on Youtube
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or
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and
people
watch western
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Western
people
’s styles on Instagram. As a result
, people
might adopt these cultures
in their daily lives. Furthermore
, another reason for this
is that people
have traveled
overseas for their business. When many businessmen travel to other countries to expand their businesses, they might run their businesses in a creative way. Change the spelling
travelled
For instance
, young entrepreneurs invest their money to have a Japanese restaurant in Indonesia. Because of this
, people
can directly experience different vibes of how it is like to be served and eat at a Japanese restaurant even in Indonesia.
I believe that the above phenomenon has been a positive development for several reasons. In the first place, people
will expand their horizons. For example
, they will learn many dances from other countries. Thus
, people
will probably gain more knowledge and a deeper understanding. In addition
to this
, the similarity of modern cultures
will make people
respect each other. The reason for this
is that the more people
expose or exchange their cultures
with one another, the more people
will respect and acknowledge diversity. Consequently
, this
could also
diminish the problem of discrimination that already existed and people
will live in harmony.
In conclusion, because of the Internet and many people
expanding their businesses, modern cultures
have been
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This
development has brought people
to gain more understanding and lead to less discrimination. Given this
situation, it is recommended that the government introduce their people
to different cultures
from other countries for the sake of diversity.Submitted by misstiasclassroom on
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