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Many people today do not feel safe either at home or when they are out. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to make people feel safer?

#people #home
unfortunately
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 nowadays many
people
 do not feel safe either at home or when they are out. In
this
essay
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 I will inform what are the reasons for it and what can be done to make
people
 feel safer. we live in a century where you can go out and there is a chance that you can be killed, or you can be at your own house and thieves can enter your house and they easily can murder you.
Therefore
 as far as I am able to judge
people
 have a reason to be afraid . In news we can read that many
people
 got killed in different situations,
for instance
 approximately 2 years ago in my hometown someone with his family got killed, or other cases 4 years ago a thief did enter one of my
friends's
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 house,
fortunately
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 no one suffered,
Moreover
 in the public transports like bus or train, it is often
people
 lost their wallet or phone and they did not notice how it can happen.
also
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 we should not forget about disasters that can happen,
for example
in
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this
 year in Turkiye and in
Syria
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the
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earthquake did claim many
people
's lives. From my point of
view
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 there are many ways to make
people
 feel safer,
personally
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 I believe that
people
 who work at the police statements should be everywhere I believe it will be the reason crime is decreased. in
conclusion
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 unlucky situations can happen anytime and anywhere,
however
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 if
people
 who work at the police statements be everywhere they will prevent it happen.
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