Many people believe that international tourism has negative implications on their countries. What is the reason for it? What can be done to change the negative attitude towads international tourism?

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, visiting other countries has become more accessible and cheaper than ever. There has been much discussion revolving around the issue of whether international tourism has a negative effect on countries. In
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I will provide the reasons and possible
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for
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issue. On one hand, international travels contribute to littering, which causes higher pollution in the countries or some areas.
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, Lithuania is mostly known for its beautiful nature which needs to be preserved, but
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the fact that visitors act
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can lead to the destruction of the environment. Another factor, which leads to negative outcomes is
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prices
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locals
. To illustrate, tourists are more wealthy than
locals
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goods, souvenirs or services.
Consequently
, local people have to pay unfair
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,
therefore
putting a burden on their income. To overcome the issues of pollution and increasing
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due to
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, governments need to implement measures
accordingly
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, it is necessary to impose environmental taxes on international tourists visiting different places.
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parks, national reserves or recreational areas. In order to solve the issue regarding increased
prices
local governments need to interfere and differentiate
prices
accordingly
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, applying discounts to local citizens
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way solving the problem of overpricing. In conclusion, international
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cause problems not only for the environment
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but
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locals
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taxes and lowering
prices
for
locals
could help with a negative attitude towards international tourists.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • environmental degradation
  • cultural erosion
  • economic vulnerability
  • infrastructure strain
  • sustainable tourism
  • conservation efforts
  • global market fluctuations
  • heritage preservation
  • community involvement
  • educational programs
  • diversified economy
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