The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.

The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.
The bar charts provide information about the jobs of graduate and postgraduate
students
who did not have full-time
work
after leaving college in 2008 in the United Kingdom.
Overall
, the two types of
students
had a similar trend in their job destination. Most
students
with both degrees continued their studies,
while
voluntary
work
was the least preferred. Having stood at almost 30,000, the number of UK graduate
students
who choose
further
study peaked at the highest rank compared to other jobs, followed by that part-time
work
and unemployment accounting for 17,735 and 16,235, respectively. The
students
who did voluntary
work
were just under 5,000, as the
last
popular job.
However
, the proportion of postgraduate
students
who did
further
study reached 2,725, being the most popular job, followed by that part-time
work
at 2,535.
In addition
, postgraduate
students
were jobless approximately half of those who did
further
study and who got voluntary
work
reached 345.
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  • Graduate
  • Postgraduate
  • Full-time work
  • Further education
  • Part-time work
  • Unemployment
  • Volunteering
  • Traveling
  • Gap year
  • Career progression
  • Job market
  • Transition
  • Academic life
  • Professional sphere
  • Economic factors
  • Social factors
  • Financial crisis
  • Long-term impact
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