The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.

The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.
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The bar charts provide information about the jobs of graduate and postgraduate
students
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who did not have full-time
work
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after leaving college in 2008 in the United Kingdom.
Overall
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, the two types of
students
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had a similar trend in their job destination. Most
students
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with both degrees continued their studies,
while
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voluntary
work
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was the least preferred. Having stood at almost 30,000, the number of UK graduate
students
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who choose
further
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study peaked at the highest rank compared to other jobs, followed by that part-time
work
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and unemployment accounting for 17,735 and 16,235, respectively. The
students
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who did voluntary
work
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were just under 5,000, as the
last
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popular job.
However
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, the proportion of postgraduate
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who did
further
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study reached 2,725, being the most popular job, followed by that part-time
work
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at 2,535.
In addition
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, postgraduate
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were jobless approximately half of those who did
further
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study and who got voluntary
work
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reached 345.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "further".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 69%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words students, work with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Graduate
  • Postgraduate
  • Full-time work
  • Further education
  • Part-time work
  • Unemployment
  • Volunteering
  • Traveling
  • Gap year
  • Career progression
  • Job market
  • Transition
  • Academic life
  • Professional sphere
  • Economic factors
  • Social factors
  • Financial crisis
  • Long-term impact
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