These days people pay more attention to famous film stars than to famous scientists. Why is this happening? Explain the trend giving reasons and examples to support your opinion.

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Nowadays in the era of technology,there is a lot of information and news available on the internet regarding every single fact but

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only attract famous actors rather than

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pay more attention to the actors because of their skills,acting,personality and fashionable clothes and

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they want to become like him/her. On the first hand, the

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are responsible for

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trend because they share most of the news related to movies,

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lifestyle, and promotes songs and videos rather than sharing information about

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' inventions.

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happening because

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love to watch their dream character and news channels want more TRP to become famous.

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are

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busy with their research and they want privacy about their ongoing research and they don't want to leak any information about inventions.

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, the film industry shares all the upcoming projects and

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attracts

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more and more.

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, social

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platforms are favourites of the young generation they follow their favourite character on Facebook,Instagram,Twitter and much more so they get in touch and stay up-to-date regarding their favourite person. On other hand, actress or actor wants more fame and attention from their fans. On Social

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platforms share their unique photos with antique costumes or other branded things and

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attract to those new things.

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didn't want interest to become fam or glam. But, they

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about new inventions and that was more helpful for us rather than those unusual products.

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, the COVID-19 vaccine was invented by zydus but they didn't share any method of how to make

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they just announced it is possible to fight from disease.

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, the

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plays a vital role in

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phenomenon.

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, social

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is a platform for becoming a famous person through fashion,skill,acting,comedy and etc.

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These days people pay more attention to famous film stars than to famous scientists. Why is this happening? Explain the trend giving reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Your opinion

Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities.Others however say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Many developing countries are currently expanding their tourist industries. Why is this the case? Is it a positive development?

Some people think that the modern communication technology is having a negative effect on social relationship. Do you agree or disagree.

Write about the following topic. It is sometimes said that ‘travel broadens the mind’. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

the chat below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018